tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post114539318351145918..comments2024-01-10T23:10:19.391+00:00Comments on miso soup: Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07005806387830212175noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-1145824169405368922006-04-23T21:29:00.000+01:002006-04-23T21:29:00.000+01:00Quite possibly Alison! (-;But wouldn't a dash or ...Quite possibly Alison! (-;<BR/><BR/>But wouldn't a dash or dotdotdot thingie after bush help, or is three birds in a bush worth only a single stone's throw? (-;<BR/><BR/>Also, even with the ambiguity it sounds so darned good, and I am sure a contemporary Japanese poet or two would go for it.<BR/><BR/>Either which way love the haiku, the magnolia, and those unlikely colours!Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-1145458456146261812006-04-19T15:54:00.000+01:002006-04-19T15:54:00.000+01:00unlikely colours! love it.unlikely colours! love it.eric l houck jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03751145684916715250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-1145438228696158032006-04-19T10:17:00.000+01:002006-04-19T10:17:00.000+01:00Hmn, I see what you mean, but that sort of makes i...Hmn, I see what you mean, but that sort of makes it sound like the magnolia bush is goldfinch coloured. <BR/><BR/>I hope it was a happy memory!Alisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07005806387830212175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-1145436594338319342006-04-19T09:49:00.000+01:002006-04-19T09:49:00.000+01:00I really like this, and wonder whether you could c...I really like this, and wonder whether you could consider removing 'in a' even though it makes it a much briefer haiku.<BR/><BR/>It also brought back a memory from a Walled Garden, thank you!Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com