tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post8358424206093978145..comments2024-01-10T23:10:19.391+00:00Comments on miso soup: Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07005806387830212175noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-25724215233243072812009-05-15T11:29:00.000+01:002009-05-15T11:29:00.000+01:00Nice one. I like the idea that in waking hours we...Nice one. I like the idea that in waking hours we try to find ourselves, only to do the opposite at night.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-16408641270584128462009-04-27T20:59:00.000+01:002009-04-27T20:59:00.000+01:00I fully agree with Alan, this is a wonderful tanka...I fully agree with Alan, this is a wonderful tanka with plenty of space within it to wander freely.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17733730.post-81593773072420097072009-04-27T16:44:00.000+01:002009-04-27T16:44:00.000+01:00Excellent tanka!
I really like the first line, ...Excellent tanka! <br /><br />I really like the first line, great intro into the poem!<br /><br />Also nice very subtle use of a pivot line.<br /><br />all my best,<br /><br />Alan<br /><B><A HREF="http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html" REL="nofollow">The With Words Competition 2009</A></B>.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com