Friday, March 31, 2006

the way
his hair falls -
for a moment
I forget
his age


J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wow -- I like it!

Alan Summers said...

Psst! 47 and three quarters.

Yep, a neat haiku and I like the five line format very much, it makes sure the reader doesn't scramble over the poem but enjoys the subtle rhythms.

sangeet said...

I must agree.. love the way it flows..