Sunday, June 11, 2006

an afternoon
of ghosts and memories -
the screams of swifts

7 comments:

Aurora said...

Well done.

Alan Summers said...

Very haunting last line.

texas haijin said...

enjoyed.

whitney said...

I've felt an afternoon like that.
I agree with Alan...haunting.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very haunting -- well said

Amalendu said...

In these days I encountered
a beautiful afternoon
a mournful afternoon
a haunting afternoon...
well said..

Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely haiku.