Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
an afternoonof ghosts and memories -the screams of swifts
Very haunting last line.
I've felt an afternoon like that.I agree with Alan...haunting.
very haunting -- well said
In these days I encountered a beautiful afternoona mournful afternoona haunting afternoon...well said..
Lovely haiku.
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Very haunting last line.
I've felt an afternoon like that.
I agree with Alan...haunting.
very haunting -- well said
In these days I encountered
a beautiful afternoon
a mournful afternoon
a haunting afternoon...
well said..
Lovely haiku.
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