Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
Excellent!Jon
.I like it too, but wonder if you could leave out 'before'?evening calm–the squabbling of magpiesand after.
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Excellent!
Jon
.
I like it too, but wonder if you could leave
out 'before'?
evening calm–
the squabbling of magpies
and after
.
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