I really like the line break choices here, the enjambment if you will.
"outside" is evocative on its own; line two ending "without" makes it a page turner, or rather a line turner; and so on.
Normally I hate a lot of line breaks: they seem to jar for no good reason; and they aren't reader friendly except to a small corps of very experienced readers.
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I really like the line break choices here, the enjambment if you will.
"outside" is evocative on its own; line two ending "without" makes it a page turner, or rather a line turner; and so on.
Normally I hate a lot of line breaks: they seem to jar for no good reason; and they aren't reader friendly except to a small corps of very experienced readers.
It's also quite beautiful! (-;
:)
What a fine reflection on the poetic life. And, how true...
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