Monday, April 10, 2006

the early daffodils
were beaten to the ground
if I could only
give up hope then I could
give up disappointment too

4 comments:

sangeet said...

This captures so much ...lovely!

Sangeet

Eric said...

alison -- yes, exactly! i've jotted this in my notebook as one of my favorites.

Denis said...

Alison, very well written. Quite memorable.

texas haijin said...

i echo denis.