Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
stiletto heels - a crow finds its balancein the top branches
my smile for the day :)
Absolutely gorgeous haiku, and works well as a senryu too.The juxtaposition of the images is spot on.I would call this a classic, and would be great to read out to an audience.Beautifully done, very funny, very visual, very memorable, very evocative, and oh so very divine.
Interesting use of "siletto heels."
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my smile for the day :)
Absolutely gorgeous haiku, and works well as a senryu too.
The juxtaposition of the images is spot on.
I would call this a classic, and would be great to read out to an audience.
Beautifully done, very funny, very visual, very memorable, very evocative, and oh so very divine.
Interesting use of "siletto heels."
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