Sunday, May 28, 2006

three roses
tinged with apricot
this wanting

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Mmmmmmm...

Wasn't sure if I liked it at first, but that last line is a hook and a half, so it got me.

I read it as very poignant, and it creates a strong emotional pause. Very impressive.

texas haijin said...

sunday school—
a dead rose petal
between gospels