Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
three roses tinged with apricot this wanting
Mmmmmmm...Wasn't sure if I liked it at first, but that last line is a hook and a half, so it got me.I read it as very poignant, and it creates a strong emotional pause. Very impressive.
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Mmmmmmm...
Wasn't sure if I liked it at first, but that last line is a hook and a half, so it got me.
I read it as very poignant, and it creates a strong emotional pause. Very impressive.
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