Thursday, January 25, 2007

a morning cyclist
breaking
puddles

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I like that breaking puddles very much.

I wonder what the reaction would be to a reading before a live audience? I'd like the ambiguity and pun play.

Alison Williams said...

Thank you! Your comment made me think about how I would read this one aloud.

Aurora said...

This one is excellent.

haiku-shelf said...

yeah!
i like your "breaking puddles"-haiku very much!

best wishes,
Angelika