Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
a morning cyclist breakingpuddles
I like that breaking puddles very much.I wonder what the reaction would be to a reading before a live audience? I'd like the ambiguity and pun play.
Thank you! Your comment made me think about how I would read this one aloud.
This one is excellent.
yeah!i like your "breaking puddles"-haiku very much!best wishes,Angelika
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I like that breaking puddles very much.
I wonder what the reaction would be to a reading before a live audience? I'd like the ambiguity and pun play.
Thank you! Your comment made me think about how I would read this one aloud.
This one is excellent.
yeah!
i like your "breaking puddles"-haiku very much!
best wishes,
Angelika
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