Sunday, April 19, 2009

playing cards
on the train
she takes his hand

2 comments:

jem said...

I like the way it could be his hand of cards or his actual hand. Nice observation, well caught.

Alan Summers said...

Good point jem, I didn't see the option of it being his hand of cards, as I was being far too romantic and slushy. ;-)

It's a wonderful haiku, one of those that will withstand the test of being re-read many many times.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009.