Poetry should be as simple as possible, but no simpler (as Einstein may have almost said)
I like the way it could be his hand of cards or his actual hand. Nice observation, well caught.
Good point jem, I didn't see the option of it being his hand of cards, as I was being far too romantic and slushy. ;-)It's a wonderful haiku, one of those that will withstand the test of being re-read many many times.all my best,AlanThe With Words Competition 2009.
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