Poetry should be as simple as possible, but no simpler (as Einstein may have almost said)
Excellent tanka! I really like the first line, great intro into the poem!Also nice very subtle use of a pivot line.all my best,AlanThe With Words Competition 2009.
I fully agree with Alan, this is a wonderful tanka with plenty of space within it to wander freely.
Nice one. I like the idea that in waking hours we try to find ourselves, only to do the opposite at night.
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