Thursday, May 07, 2009

with both hands
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Gorgeous!!!Do you need ' with' ?


both hands
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella


both hands!
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella
all my best,

Alan
With Words.

Alison said...

You could be right - this started life as a possible renga verse, so I was less concerned about making it work standalone.

all in pink
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella

Alan Summers said...

I kinda like 'all in pink' as well, really spoilt for choice. ;-)all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009.

jem said...

I like this - that sense that the toddler probably has no idea who Elvis is.