Wednesday, May 27, 2009

coming in to land
the plane is
but everything
below has crashed


Paul Smith said...

An intriguing poem Alison. The sense of re-entering the frantic pace of the everyday world (after a break, perhaps?) is very strong.

jem said...

Scary. I've got a fear of flying. But now I think I've got a fear of being on the ground!

Alison said...

Thanks for the responses. I wasn't sure how this would come over. What you both say suggests that I've had some success in communicating.

Alan Summers said...

Reminds me of the stupid stunt by the President's office when they had the Airforce One fly near skyscrapers in New York.