Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
Gorgeous!!!Do you need ' with' ?both handsthe toddler holds upan Elvis umbrellaboth hands!the toddler holds upan Elvis umbrellaall my best,AlanWith Words.
You could be right - this started life as a possible renga verse, so I was less concerned about making it work standalone. all in pinkthe toddler holds upan Elvis umbrella
I kinda like 'all in pink' as well, really spoilt for choice. ;-)all my best,AlanThe With Words Competition 2009.
I like this - that sense that the toddler probably has no idea who Elvis is.
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Gorgeous!!!Do you need ' with' ?
both hands
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella
both hands!
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella
all my best,
Alan
With Words.
You could be right - this started life as a possible renga verse, so I was less concerned about making it work standalone.
all in pink
the toddler holds up
an Elvis umbrella
I kinda like 'all in pink' as well, really spoilt for choice. ;-)all my best,
Alan
The With Words Competition 2009.
I like this - that sense that the toddler probably has no idea who Elvis is.
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