Tuesday, September 07, 2010

a window frames
the whole free world
in one white gull

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I love it!

It's so strong I wonder if you need "frames" e.g.

a window frame
the whole free world
in one white gull


window frame
the whole free world
in one white gull


all my very best

Alan
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Pacze Moj said...

Good poem and interesting comment. I like "frame" as a verb. I think of the way one person can frame another for a crime. Maybe this is what the window is doing to the world...