Poetry should be as simple as possible, but no simpler (as Einstein may have almost said)
I love it!It's so strong I wonder if you need "frames" e.g.a window framethe whole free worldin one white gullwindow framethe whole free worldin one white gullall my very bestAlan2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink.
Good poem and interesting comment. I like "frame" as a verb. I think of the way one person can frame another for a crime. Maybe this is what the window is doing to the world...
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