Ingredients - my published haiku, tanka, haibun and the occasional piece of writing that fits none of those categories.
I love it!It's so strong I wonder if you need "frames" e.g.a window framethe whole free worldin one white gullwindow framethe whole free worldin one white gullall my very bestAlan2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink.
Good poem and interesting comment. I like "frame" as a verb. I think of the way one person can frame another for a crime. Maybe this is what the window is doing to the world...
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I love it!
It's so strong I wonder if you need "frames" e.g.
a window frame
the whole free world
in one white gull
window frame
the whole free world
in one white gull
all my very best
Alan
2010 With Words Haiku Competition: weblink
.
Good poem and interesting comment. I like "frame" as a verb. I think of the way one person can frame another for a crime. Maybe this is what the window is doing to the world...
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