Tuesday, July 10, 2007

the most casual
of gestures can betray
a tenderness
so strong it almost
pierces the heart

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Wow!

It really makes you want to know more.

Alison said...

Hmmmm.... that might go beyond the scope of tanka!

Alan Summers said...

Then again, maybe a tanka sequence! ;-)