Tuesday, July 10, 2007

the most casual
of gestures can betray
a tenderness
so strong it almost
pierces the heart

3 comments:

Pan Haiku Review said...

Wow!

It really makes you want to know more.

Alison said...

Hmmmm.... that might go beyond the scope of tanka!

Pan Haiku Review said...

Then again, maybe a tanka sequence! ;-)